• Crying Roses •
Beautiful tears
Oh, how they fall
Seems like they're running away
from your eyes, my love.
You crawl, you beg
And yet you stay away
Why? For a song?
Is it for one last dawn?
I mustn't I told you
But with hope I hold you
It lingers in our heart
You fear not coming back.
Crimson liquid goes out
From that kissing machine, your mouth
You can, you have
Oh dear, please come back now.
You fought: for kind,
For love, for this world, for us
Oh heart, don't die
Don't leave me in this life.
These spines of this rose
Laying on top of your corpse
They cry, they moan
And at last, they're gone.
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A little poem about a lady who lost her love in war...
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 Ooohh...it makes me all tingly...My brother leaves for Iraq tomorrow morning. Very nice piece. I almost wanted to cry.
  Like your other poem, it doesnt seem to have a definite structure. Some of your rhymes just dont fit that way. Other then that, its excellent, with a great rhythm and simple yet effective imagery.
 Crimson liquid goes out
From that kissing machine, your mouth wow, this is great.. and i love the design of this image.. lovely.   me gusta las siluetas de las rosas, simplificaste una foto o lo dibujaste?
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